In many countries, crime rate is increasing. What do you think are the main cause of crime? How can we deal with those causes?

In recent society, many countries are experiencing a rise in crime incidents. It is believed that because of severe poverty and

lack

Use synonyms

of

education

Use synonyms

contributed to

this

Linking Words

. To combat the issues the government should create more job opportunities and subsidize

education

Use synonyms

to make it affordable for everyone. In

this

Linking Words

essay

Add a comma

,essay

show examples

I will explore and discuss the main cause and ways to deal with the problem. The biggest proportion of law offenders belongs to those below the poverty line. People under

this

Linking Words

category in our community often struggle daily to make ends meet. I would argue that

this

Linking Words

reason triggers them to commit crimes,

such

Linking Words

as robberies and theft, just to provide food, pay expenses and be sufficient for themselves and their family's needs.

In addition

Linking Words

, their inability to get proper job placement hinders them to acquire well-paid

jobs

Use synonyms

or even being hired because they

lack

Use synonyms

educational backgrounds. Being jobless without

education

Use synonyms

and

lack

Use synonyms

of financial means urges a criminal to rob or steal from someone. There are two strategies that would be effective to stop the trend.

Firstly

Linking Words

, by creating more job opportunities for skilled and non-skilled workers and offering practical training, especially to those people without

education

Use synonyms

.

This

Linking Words

would give chances for many individuals

to

Correct article usage

the to

show examples

acquire decent and well-paying

jobs

Use synonyms

.

Secondly

Linking Words

, the government should subsidize

education

Use synonyms

to make it affordable for every individual in the community through policies and initiatives.

This

Linking Words

action encourages people to

enroll

Change the spelling

enrol

show examples

and study to get higher

education

Use synonyms

that benefits them in their future work. These measures employ and ensure to have law-abiding citizens since everyone is educated and with

jobs

Use synonyms

. In conclusion, it is certain that the crime rate in some countries will increase if not properly addressed, because of the intense poverty issues and

lack

Use synonyms

of

education

Use synonyms

.

However

Linking Words

, to eliminate or diminish

this

Linking Words

problem two identified strategies must be put in place; creating

jobs

Use synonyms

and subsidizing

education

Use synonyms

to make it available for every individual is more effective.