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Some people believe that genetically modified food is good, while others think that it has a bad influence on health. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, some countries use genetically modified
food
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. Some
people
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 think that it is a good way for several reasons.
On the other hand
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, others believe that it is bad because it leads to some problems. I agree with
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 statement because it causes diseases and is not natural at all. On the one hand, genetically modified
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 leads to an increase in
food
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. And the population is raised everywhere in the world.
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, the genetics of
food
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 can cover the needs of
people
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.
For example
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, China uses
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 method to increase the
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.
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, some
people
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 use
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 process to make
food
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 tasty. Some research has been done and they found that genetically modified
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 can change the
taste
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 of
food
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.
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, genetically modified
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 has negatively affected the health of
people
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 because:
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, genetically modified
food
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 is one of the concerns that cause many illnesses all over the world. Some studies show that genetically modified
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 leads to diseases,
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 as cancer and diabetes, cancer is the most dangerous disease in the world.
Secondly
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, genetically modified
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 is not natural. When we eat some chicken we find the
taste
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 is different, and it is not delicious, because some countries use
this
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 method to make chicken which is bigger than the natural.
To sum up
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, there is no doubt that genetically modified
food
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 is acceptable for some
people
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 because providing more
food
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 and
food
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 can change the
taste
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, but some researchers found that
this
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 way causes issues
such
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 as cancer and changes the
taste
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 of
food
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. In my opinion, I agree with the
last
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 statement and we must stop genetically modification because many
people
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 will die.
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