The table below show how many tourists from five countries visited Australia in different years from 2006 to 2010.

The table below show how many tourists from five countries visited Australia in different years from 2006 to 2010.
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The table illustrates the
number
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of visitors from New Zealand, Japan, Canada, China, Germany, and France to
Australia
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in different years between 2006 and 2010.
Overall
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, amount of travellers to
Australia
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from most countries increased from 2006 to 2010.
While
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only the
travellers
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from Japan decreased. Between 2006 and 2010, the
number
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of Chinese
tourists
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visiting
Australia
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rose significantly by about 100,000, which is the biggest.
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New Zealand’s
tourists
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fluctuated from 2006 to 2010 and
then
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, there was a moderate increase of around 30,000. In 2010, New Zealand had the highest
number
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of
tourists
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at 1,011,000 and China’s
tourists
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had the second higher at 360,000.
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, France’s
tourists
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had the lowest at 93,000.
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, the
number
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of visitors from Canada and German rose slightly by around 16,000 and 19,000, respectively from 2006 to 2010. Visitors from Japan to
Australia
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almost halved over the period. The
number
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of Japanese
tourists
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travelling to
Australia
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grew up dramatically by about 300,000 between 2006 and 2010.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, australia, tourists with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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