What are the advantages and disadvantages of children watching TV?

Nowadays, Spending more

time

on

television

is becoming so popular for many

children

.

However

, there are both pros and cons

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TV

programs. In

this

essay, I will discuss some of the benefits and drawbacks of watching

television

for kids and provide my opinion

at the end

. Let’s start by looking at the advantages.

Firstly

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positive result of kids watching

TV

is that it helps them to develop an interest in learning and remembering

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concepts easily.

Secondly

, watching foreign movies or cartoons without translation may help them to learn another language.

For example

, my younger cousin has improved his English language skills by watching

TV

series with original dubbing. Turning to the other side of the argument, watching

television

may have a negative

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for young people. Their eyesight will become worse.

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when watching

TV

, the eyes have to focus on the screen, so they are often stressed and over-regulated. Increasingly, their vision is getting narrower and they cannot see without glasses.

In addition

,

children

using more

time

for

television

will not have enough

time

for

such

outdoor activities as playing football, cycling... In conclusion,

Television

has both benefits and drawbacks for

children

. Even though it can assist young people become more aware of the world around them, it can

also

lead to health problems and interfere with daily activities. In my opinion, the advantages of

television

outweigh the disadvantages because I believe that

children

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able to choose the right content and use their

time

wisely.