what are the advantages and the disadvantages for children of television?
there is an argument
that’s
children who always watch Unnecessary verb
that
television
have a benefit and a negative impact. Viewing on television
sometimes give a big risk on
their Change preposition
to
healthy
. Currently, many teenage early in the morning and even late Replace the word
health
night
watching Change preposition
at night
television
becomes
their daily habits.
Let’s start by looking at the advantages Correct subject-verb agreement
become
for
children of Change preposition
apply
television
. First,
not only it helps them to develop an interest in learning and remembering the
pictures easily but Correct article usage
apply
also
it provides useful information about social, natural, history and human society for them to have more understanding about prospects due to
wide
of educational programs Correct article usage
the wide
such
as BBC. Moreover
, it can improve foreign language skill
when watching cartoons or movies which are produced by international film agencies. Fix the agreement mistake
skills
For example
, my sister
cousin had ameliorated his Change noun form
sister's
english
listening skill by watching Change the capitalization
English
television
cartoons with original dubbing.
Another drawback is that watching television
will affect on
children’s eyes, like short-sighted status because youngsters often tend to sit for long hours watching their favourite shows, series or games . Change preposition
apply
Therefore
, they always have to bespectacled
to do studying and working. Add a missing verb
be bespectacled
Especially
, Correct pronoun usage
It especially
it
Correct pronoun usage
apply
harm
Correct subject-verb agreement
harms
to
sleep and other Change preposition
apply
heath
issues or it may impact Correct your spelling
health
on
social development. Change preposition
apply
For example
, Correct article usage
a neighbor
neighbor
younger near Change the spelling
neighbour
house
had their brain influenced by watching too much Add an article
the house
television
because she doesn’t cease thinking about a certain program to
Change preposition
apply
television
. Consequently
, she convulsive
for long period.
In conclusion, Add a missing verb
is convulsive
the
parents should have guidance on what teenagers should watch and give them a limited time to watch.Correct article usage
apply
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