what are the advantages and the disadvantages for children of television?

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children who always watch
television
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have a benefit and a negative impact. Viewing on
television
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sometimes give a big risk
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their
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. Currently, many teenage early in the morning and even late
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watching
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their daily habits. Let’s start by looking at the advantages
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children of
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First,
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not only it helps them to develop an interest in learning and remembering
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pictures easily but
also
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it provides useful information about social, natural, history and human society for them to have more understanding about prospects
due to
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wide
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the wide
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of educational programs
such
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as BBC.
Moreover
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, it can improve foreign language
skill
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when watching cartoons or movies which are produced by international film agencies.
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, my
sister
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cousin had ameliorated his
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listening skill by watching
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cartoons with original dubbing. Another drawback is that watching
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will affect
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children’s eyes, like short-sighted status because youngsters often tend to sit for long hours watching their favourite shows, series or games .
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, they always have to
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to do studying and working.
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,
it
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harm
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to
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sleep and other
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issues or it may impact
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social development.
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,
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a neighbor
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neighbor
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younger near
house
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had their brain influenced by watching too much
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because she doesn’t cease thinking about a certain program
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television
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.
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, she
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for long period. In conclusion,
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parents should have guidance on what teenagers should watch and give them a limited time to watch.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sedentary
  • engaging
  • linguistic skills
  • exposure
  • inappropriate content
  • distort
  • optimizing
  • debate
  • implications
  • viewing habits
  • parental guidance
  • educational programs
  • screen time
  • stereotypes
  • unhealthy behaviors
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