Some people think that people can use animals for the benefit of humans. Others believe that this practice is wrong. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Animal labouring is one topic
that is
universally become controversial among countries. In many nations, there are some rural areas that normally use
animals
for harvesting their product,
while
developed countries and some organizations condemn
this
action, and legislate for
this
problem. As far as I am concerned, I totally agree with the determination that using
animals
for the benefit of humans should not be allowed in today's society.
To begin
with, the point of view of most people, especially in rural places, seems that
this
practice is not a kind of abuse. They claimed that those
animals
have the relationships with them like a member of their families.
For example
, in southern Thailand, villagers have practised their monkeys since they were juveniles for climbing to grab the coconuts in the high trees.
Therefore
,
this
is a promise that they do not use their
animals
too hard and give them adequate food and treat them as their own offspring.
However
,
this
is not a sufficient reason to justify
this
practice.
On the contrary
, there are more reasonable facts that animal labour should be illegal as well.
First,
every life ought to have its independence.
Although
some people said
this
action made
animals
have more physical activities and still have nutritious food, they should still be allowed to live in their natural habitats.
Moreover
, smuggling these
animals
is very cruel and immoral.
This
kind of practice is not different from human trafficking, so using
animals
should seem like one of abuse by the way. In conclusion, no matter how many reasons supported the advantages of using
animals
, whether the imaginary promise or the relationship between
animals
, it is still immoral and illegal of using those pitiful
animals
. Any kind of abuse should become more seriously controversial for the equality of every life in the world.
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