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living in a counrty where you have to speak a fareign language can cause serious social and practical problems . in what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

#counrty #fareign #language
In the fast-paced world, people are focusing to learn many
languages
 for their employment requirements. I totally agree with speaking foreign
languages
 in the current
country
. On the one hand, learning other
countries
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countries'
country's
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languages
 is helpful for the
country
's development.
For example
, citizens can easily interact with foreigners, those who come for holiday trips and business meetings. Even more, bilingual skills make
more
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one more
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 confident and cope with learning abilities.
On the other hand
, there will be a chance to their ancient language at shelve.
For instance
, if a person is an expert in other world
languages
, but can't communicate with the local
languages
, he can't survive without anyone's help. So, students must practice their local
languages
 as a priority. In the conclusion, speaking other
country
languages
 in living
country
 is not a problem at all. Just need to focus to know local
languages
 as well.
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