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Some say that the best way to help poor countries is financial aids. Other say other forms of aid should be given. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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It is wide range debated that supporting developing
countries
, in terms of financial aid bring optimistic outcomes to assist them.
While
 some opponents argue that helping those
countries
 can be done in various forms of help. My discussion of both views and inform my personal perspectives will be elaborated
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this
 essay.
To begin
 with, many people agree that to be able to encourage the third-world
country
, we need to assist them with the financial
system
. Take UNICEF
for example
,
this
 scheme is a well-known non-profit company that always seeks to help the poor areas around the world
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earn money from human races from developed
countries
.
Therefore
, some
countries
 received support as money into their government
system
 to manage problems that they've been struggling with and understand their people's
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needs.
However
, from
this
 respective, it is understandable that providing financial aid is crucial in poverty areas.
On the other hand
, it is inevitable that money is not solely a factor to improve developing
countries
. It required many forms of help to change their
country
. In terms of education and employment.
For instance
, many volunteers from the Western side are willing to be overseas and help to teach English in poor places or rural areas that cannot access good education nowadays.
Moreover
, when a
country
 is full of well-educated people they can build an employment
system
 or make their own businesses. From my perspective, helping developing counties around the world should be combined with both ways in the financial
system
 so their government can tackle the right problem in their own
country
 and the volunteer sector from human abilities provided by developed nations
also
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 important to solve these issues as well. In conclusion,
although
 it is undeniable that financial way could be faster to assist poor nations,
also
 the human skill sets
such
 as teaching and making business can lead to the county's benefits effectively.
Therefore
, combining both ways would be the perfect solution for developing
countries
.
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