The diagram shows the process by which milk and related products are produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The diagram shows the process by which milk and related products are produced.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
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The diagram illustrates eight different steps that
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for producing
milk
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and the items like cheese , cream and butter. In general, cows were sent for a process called grazing so that it can increase
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milk
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productivity , and in the final stage , the
milk
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and the products of
milk
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are distributed for the sale in stores. To be specific, in the initial stage cows were fed very well for
milk
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production .
Secondly
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, the cows are milked using a milking machine twice a day .
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, the produced
milk
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stored in a cylinder-shaped chamber called refrigerator storage . Moving forward, the stored
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is
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pumped directly into a
milk
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tanker for daily delivery to the dairy. After that , in
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the
milk
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and the byproducts
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as cheese and butter were separated from it .
Subsequently
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, the pure
milk
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is
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pasteurized and packed for distribution and delivered to shops and supermarkets so that people can purchase it for household purposes.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words milk with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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