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Many peole now have the freedom to work and live anywhere because of advances in communication technology and trasportation. Do the advantages of this devlopment outweight the disadvantages.

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After the corona pandemic world has become faster plenty of workers are doing
work
 from home because of modern technology like the internet and other applications.
Nevertheless
, it has some positives and negatives on both sides These days, online
work
 has become a trend and it is an easy source of earnings
as well as
 saves fuel, and environmental problems and prevent an accident because a
person
 has to
work
 at home so he does not need a vehicle to reach his destinations so it saves fuel cost and most essential time.
Furthermore
, communication technology is the most convenient and easy way of working.
For instance
, it is more comfortable because a
person
 does not have to travel to his office he can do
work
 at his home and take appropriate breaks or rest.
Additionally
, employees can stay with their families and can
work
 from other places and
also
 it saves rent and they can attend meetings with the help of the internet in laptop applications.
Besides
 the
advantages
Add a comma
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 there are a few negative sides that
work
 can lead
person
's physical deficit.
For example
, too much
work
 on a computer screen can hurt human eyes and prevents physical movement so there is a high chance of obesity problems.
Moreover
, there is plenty of chances of online fraud
person
 have to take care of it.
To conclude
, the advanced IT sector is playing a vital role to provide employees with a
person
 who can
work
 with freedom and easily everywhere.
However
, people have to take care of online scams and negative information.
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