The maps below show the development of the Paradise island for tourism purposed.

The maps below show the development of the Paradise island for tourism purposed.
The two maps illustrate the main changes that have taken place in Paradise Island in the past and the present.
Overall
,the islet has undergone several changes, most significantly, there are more new infrastructures will be added,
such
as a swimming area, accommodation, cafeteria, BBQ space and so forth. First and foremost,the peninsula in the past was surrounded by palm trees. A pier was situated on the west coast of the isle, which allows boats to access the shores and a beach was located on the northwest of the island. The Natural spring existed in the east direction, which was near the rocks. The unique facility-Scientific Research Station still remained until the renovation. At present, the research station is demolished and replaced by a huge hotel with a swimming pool. The pier is enlarged, which cruise ships can be permitted to access.An open restaurant and BBQ field are set up in the centre of the island.
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the spring, a cafe shop is assorted.
Furthermore
, the beach area is where people can be allowed to swim. Interestingly, the amenity of a cycle path connects to all facilities.
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