The chart below show how frequently people in the US ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.

The chart below show how frequently people in the US ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.
The bar chart compares how often US citizens ate fast
food
in
restaurants
between 2003 and 2013.
Overall
, it is evident that the majority of the population ate at
food
joints once a week and once or twice a month throughout the period
while
very few people enjoyed meals there every day and had never eaten there In 2003 it was popular to eat at
restaurants
as about 31% of the US citizen were recorded eating there once a week. Their rate perked at around 33% in the following three years before dropping to approximately 26%. ,
Also
individuals who visited
food
joints once or twice a month recorded a substantial proportion. In ,2003 they recorded 30%, which declined to 25% in 2006 before growing significantly to around 33% which was relatively similar to the rate of individuals who ate in
restaurants
once a month
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2006.
Furthermore
, a moderate percentage of people like to visit
food
joints several times a week and a few times a year, attracting a rate not higher than 20% each year over the period. The least significant categories were crowds who eat in the
restaurants
every day and those who had never eaten there. In 2003 around 4% and 5% of citizens ate at
restaurants
respectively by the next 3 ,years the proportion decreased to around 3% and 4% respectively and remain static the of the given period.
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