You live near a public school. The school asked residents to help maintain the school building and playground. Write a letter to the principal. Explain why would you like to help. Tell them how you can help. Let them know when you are available.

#school #residents #playground

Dear Sir, I'm writing

this

letter, to offer my help in the renovation of the school building

as well as

the playground.

To begin

with, I am an architect by profession and working for a popular architecture company for the

last

15 years.

Therefore

, I would like to volunteer for

this

project. As I mentioned, I am a member of the architecture department and I really believe that my skills and expertise will help to make

this

project a great success.

In addition

, I can help to make stunning designs for the building

along with

this

, I can

also

ask my teams to help with furnishing the building.

Moreover

, I work as a manager in the company and I have numerous responsibilities related to my work. In the end, I am available during the weekends because at that time I am free from my work and I can make the designs

according to

your taste without wasting any penny. Looking forward to hearing back from you. Thank you. Yours faithfully, Raj Singh

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9 paragraphs

172 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You live near a public school. The school asked residents to help maintain the school building and playground. Write a letter to the principal. Explain why would you like to help. Tell them how you can help. Let them know when you are available.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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