You live near a public school. The school asked residents to help maintain the school building and playground. Write a letter to the principal. Explain why would you like to help. Tell them how you can help. Let them know when you are available.

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Dear Sir, I'm writing

this

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letter, to offer my help in the renovation of the school building

as well as

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the playground.

To begin

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with, I am an architect by profession and working for a popular architecture company for the

last

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15 years.

Therefore

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, I would like to volunteer for

this

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project. As I mentioned, I am a member of the architecture department and I really believe that my skills and expertise will help to make

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project a great success.

In addition

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, I can help to make stunning designs for the building

along with

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this

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, I can

also

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ask my teams to help with furnishing the building.

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, I work as a manager in the company and I have numerous responsibilities related to my work. In the end, I am available during the weekends because at that time I am free from my work and I can make the designs

according to

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your taste without wasting any penny. Looking forward to hearing back from you. Thank you. Yours faithfully, Raj Singh

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

172 words

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You live near a public school. The school asked residents to help maintain the school building and playground. Write a letter to the principal. Explain why would you like to help. Tell them how you can help. Let them know when you are available.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Some people think that it is good for a country’s culture to show imported foreign film and TV programmes. Others think that it is better to produce these locally. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The only way to improve road safety is to impose severe punishment for driving offences. Do you agree or disagree?

In some countries today, people are having their first child when they are older. What are the reasons for this? Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people find a new jobs and study aboard. What are the disadvantages and advantages of those case?