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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages and disadvantages.

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In recent years, some nations have experienced a significant drop in the number of older
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 in the community
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 a higher registration is noteworthy for young
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. In
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 essay, I will argue that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. The role of older adults is beneficial in our society, they act as role models to younger ones. The reduction in number vastly affects the upcoming generation since fewer of them will be able to guide and mentor them.
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, a well-taught person is more wiser and knowledgeable in life,
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 all can be provided by those
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 who already surpassed young adult life.
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, if society is more with youth it will result in poor governance.
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 means that less skilled government workers will be capable of running the government will be capable to run
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system.
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, the lack of experienced and enough knowledge hinders a person's decision-making, which is essential to the business and can only be done with
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 with experience, and good decision-making which is essential to the business only can be done with
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 with experience and knowledge.
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, the advantage of having more young
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 around us is that the country will have strong socio-economic progress. Since more physically fit
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 in various workforces can sustain jobs that demand strength that those aged 65 years old and above cannot compete with. In construction industries,
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, a well-built and strong body is important when carrying heavy loads and working with machines with fast performances the return of business is at speed.
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, those at a younger age can combat long hours of work, unlike their counterparts preferred to stay at home and rest. Businesses related to tourism and F& B,
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 as hotels, restaurants, and bars, all require
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 who can keep up with fast pace working environment and a lot of socialization skills. In conclusion, despite the fact that older
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 are wiser and greatly impart good teaching to younger
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;
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, it is certain that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. I believe that having more younger adults around can boost the country's socio-economic, as they are socially active, physically fit, and more creative which is needed in many businesses, compared to older
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 who generally choose to be at home after work and rest.
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