Some people say that school leavers should start working immediately. Others say that they should continue their studies at university. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, a
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of people think, that
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is important to start working right after finishing
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others believe, that going to university is a necessity. From my point of view, individuals should get a degree at university.
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with, those who continued their studying after school have more knowledge and it will be easier for them to find the piece of work in the future.
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, studying at high educational institutions will definitely help to find a well-paid occupation.
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,
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is simply impossible to find a
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in some areas without getting a Bachelor's or Master's degree.
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, a lawyer's career requires having enough level of education.
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, studying at
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is a great opportunity to expand your social circle and find a
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of interesting people, which could help you in your
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life, especially with your career.
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, we can not deny the fact, that there are families, that can not afford to pay the high price for education for their children.
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, single-parent or low-income ones.
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, a
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of children don't want to continue their studies after school,
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why they find a suitable
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for themselves and that brings those individuals happiness. As a matter of fact, there are a
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of work opportunities, that do not require special knowledge
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fields.
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make-up artists, waitresses or waiters and administrators in restaurants do not need to have a degree to get a
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. In conclusion, academic studies give you opportunities to gain the qualification and a better
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, but
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option is not suitable for all.
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