The table gives information about enrollment of students in Manchester University in 1937, 1963 and 2017.

The table gives information about enrollment of students in Manchester University in 1937, 1963 and 2017.
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The given table compares the admission of scholars to Manchester University from 1937 to 2017.
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, it is evident that the number of new student enrollment grew dramatically throughout the period. ,
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the proportion of male and female undergraduates fluctuate,
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of enrolling individuals within 40 miles of Manchester declined, The percentage of students from abroad increased.
To begin
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, in 1937 the School admitted 327 Juniors,
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figure increased in the following 3 decades to 1133 students. By 2017 the number of enrollments had substantially risen to 6254. In the beginning, 45% of females gained admission to the school and the remaining 55% were males. The proportions of both genders fluctuate over the given period.
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, the
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of undergraduates who came from within 40 miles of Manchester was slightly higher than half of the entire enrolled student population, their percentage dropped considerably to 15% in the next 30 years, and their
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kept on decreasing by 2017 the recorded low of 1-2% students. In ,contrast the percentage of undergraduates from overseas
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accounted for 6% of the whole population, after 3 decades they
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a 1% increase from people from 26 countries. In 2017 their
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witnessed significant growth of 25% from crowds from 102 nations.
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