The bar chart shows the number of visitors to four London museums. Interpret the information as given in the chart and write what you perceive in 150 words.
The bar graph illustrates the number of
tourists
in different months in London Use synonyms
museums
.
Use synonyms
Overall
, in London , the Linking Words
British
Use synonyms
Museum
was very famous and the figure of visitors picks in August. Use synonyms
However
, the National Linking Words
Museum
was less popular in the Use synonyms
overall
months.
Linking Words
To begin
with, in June month, around 400000 people visited .History, Linking Words
British
and Science gallery . Use synonyms
While
Linking Words
,
only 200000 Remove the comma
apply
tourists
visited the National Use synonyms
Museum
. Use synonyms
Similarly
, in July few people liked to visit
National art gallery rather than others. On contrary, the popularity of Linking Words
British
Use synonyms
museums
increased dramatically from 400000 to 700000 which was Use synonyms
also
the highest number of Linking Words
tourists
in Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
museum
in August month. Use synonyms
In addition
, the History gallery stands in the second highest position with 600000 visitors. Linking Words
Whereas
, National Linking Words
Museum
and Science Use synonyms
Museum
showed around 400000 foreigners.
Use synonyms
Moreover
, in the month of September, people decreased to visit all Linking Words
museums
.The figure showed the Use synonyms
British
Use synonyms
Museum
was a higher number of Use synonyms
tourists
and the science Use synonyms
museums
were less crowded. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, Linking Words
at the end
of the year , the Linking Words
British
Use synonyms
Museum
was famous Use synonyms
while
other Linking Words
museums
were less than 300000 visitors visit.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tourists, museums, british, museum with synonyms.
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