The bar chart shows the number of visitors to four London museums. Interpret the information as given in the chart and write what you perceive in 150 words.
The bar graph illustrates the number of
tourists
in different months in London museums
.
Overall
, in London , the British
Museum
was very famous and the figure of visitors picks in August. However
, the National Museum
was less popular in the overall
months.
To begin
with, in June month, around 400000 people visited .History, British
and Science gallery . While
,
only 200000 Remove the comma
apply
tourists
visited the National Museum
. Similarly
, in July few people liked to visit
National art gallery rather than others. On contrary, the popularity of British
museums
increased dramatically from 400000 to 700000 which was also
the highest number of tourists
in this
museum
in August month. In addition
, the History gallery stands in the second highest position with 600000 visitors. Whereas
, National Museum
and Science Museum
showed around 400000 foreigners.
Moreover
, in the month of September, people decreased to visit all museums
.The figure showed the British
Museum
was a higher number of tourists
and the science museums
were less crowded. Furthermore
, at the end
of the year , the British
Museum
was famous while
other museums
were less than 300000 visitors visit.Submitted by jeetkacha13 on
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