The bar chart shows the number of visitors to four London museums. Interpret the information as given in the chart and write what you perceive in 150 words.

The bar chart shows the number of visitors to four London

museums. Interpret the information as given in the chart and write

what you perceive in 150 words.
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The bar graph illustrates the number of
tourists
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in different months in London
museums
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.
Overall
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, in London , the
British
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Museum
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was very famous and the figure of visitors picks in August.
However
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, the National
Museum
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was less popular in the
overall
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months.
To begin
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with, in June month, around 400000 people visited .History,
British
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and Science gallery .
While
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,
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only 200000
tourists
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visited the National
Museum
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.
Similarly
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, in July few people liked to visit National art gallery rather than others. On contrary, the popularity of
British
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museums
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increased dramatically from 400000 to 700000 which was
also
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the highest number of
tourists
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in
this
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museum
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in August month.
In addition
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, the History gallery stands in the second highest position with 600000 visitors.
Whereas
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, National
Museum
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and Science
Museum
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showed around 400000 foreigners.
Moreover
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, in the month of September, people decreased to visit all
museums
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.The figure showed the
British
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Museum
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was a higher number of
tourists
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and the science
museums
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were less crowded.
Furthermore
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,
at the end
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of the year , the
British
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Museum
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was famous
while
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other
museums
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were less than 300000 visitors visit.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words tourists, museums, british, museum with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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