you recently ordered something online. When the delivery came it was not complete. write a letter to the company to explain what you ordered and what is missing, explain the importance of missing item, ask for replacement item.

Dear Sir, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with your service after I found out that one of the items in my order is missing. I have placed an order for an Apple mouse and a Macbook charger and the expected delivery of the items was to arrive on the 20th.But,
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the shipment was delayed.And when it arrived
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noticed that the charger for my laptop is missing.I ordered it as
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needed it urgently since my old one was broken and my school is starting next week.Without
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charger I will not be able to operate my laptop and might have to miss classes. I have decided to purchase a new one from the showroom in order not to miss school.I would like you to take some action against
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and replace me with something else as your policy states that items missing will be replaced with something else and no money return. I hope you will consider my request and do the needful as early as possible. Thanking You, Yours Sincerely Nida.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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