People have different ways of escaping the stress and difficulites of modern life. Some read, some exercise, others work in their gardens. What do you think is the best way of reducing stress.
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so
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is so
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stress
. Many individuals try to find Add an article
a solution
the solution
solution
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solutions
how
to reveal Change preposition
to how
stress
and feel better mentally and even physically. There are a lot of resolutions of
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to
this
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. So in Correct your spelling
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this
essay
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further
examine this
thought-provoking issue.
To begin
with, it is so important to deal with stress
considering that it can lead to dreadful consequences. Firstly
, one of the main method
to escape Change to a plural noun
methods
the
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apply
stress
is sport
. In order to get empty your mind. Add an article
a sport
In other words
, when you do sport
you always should be concentrated for instance
on your technique due to
not get injuries . Also
, instead
of Correct article usage
a gym
gym
it can be various types of Add a comma
,gym
the
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sport
. For example
, football, tennis, basketball
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and basketball
Thus
, when you fully concentrate on something that need
all your attention your brain slowly Change the verb form
needs
start
to relax. Correct subject-verb agreement
starts
This
paradox happens because your cells and neurones do not solve or compute difficult tasks they just think how
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about how
for instance
if you are playing on
tennis. Change preposition
apply
Furthermore
, extreme activities can help you to stop thinking about everything what
is bothering you. Change the word
that
That is
happening for the reasons that you need full of concentration and attention because it could be threatening for
your life. Change preposition
to
In addition
, you can just sleep it is very
straightforward solution. Add an article
a very
As a result
, when you sleep you
brain relaxes Change the pronoun
your
to
and you cannot worry about something. Replace the word
too
Moreover
, you can do housework. Such
as,
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vacuum
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vacuuming
make
laundry etc.
In conclusion, there are many Wrong verb form
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how to escape Correct your spelling
methods
the
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stress
. However
, from my perspective
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sport
since instead
of you empty your brain as well as
you can make a good physique.Submitted by slobodanatol83 on
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
