Advantages and disadvantages of mobile phones in our daily lives
Smartphones are the primary needs in everyone's daily life today. The main benefits of
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are easy to carry and its communication development, Linking Words
however
, the key drawbacks are wasting hours and poor social attitudes.
The existence of iPhones, Samsung, and Linking Words
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cellphones'
types in these past 6 years are definitely excellent specifically with their form. Compared to 50 years ago when the size was quite huge with phone handles, now, it become smaller and more flexible to be taken in the pocket, so that people Change noun form
cell phone
could
make a call with their family and friends everywhere nowadays. Wrong verb form
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establishment continued with new tools known as Video Calls. It enables men or women to create visual connections in the shape of face-to-face phone calls. Once they make a call, they will see the people they have contacted at the present moment. Whatsapp, a messenger application, Linking Words
for example
, has developed an innovative tool for Video calls and it has been very useful since more than 1 million in the world have installed the application.
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, mobile phones can Linking Words
cause
much time-consuming. Verb problem
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is because they provide a lot of access to the owner to have fun with interesting apps and games to play. Linking Words
Hence
, they become more addicted which leads to laziness and less productivity. Another disadvantage is when people immerse themselves to bear with it all the time, they will run into Linking Words
lacking
social behaviour. Wrong verb form
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For instance
, children aged between 7-Linking Words
10
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and 10
are failed
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fail
due to
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to play
with their Change preposition
with playing
iPad
all day long.
In conclusion, the development of cellular phones in these decades is truly meaningful, especially with the flexibility of their shapes and the possibility to make a call anywhere and anytime. Correct your spelling
iPads
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thing should be wise to avoid wasting time and having poor social attitudes.Linking Words
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