Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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increased number of people who are affected by a

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are preferring to

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of treatments and medicines

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of making an appointment with a

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financial resources does not surpass its drawbacks. On the one hand, one benefit regarding

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of medicines is that it may be useful in order to save people’s money

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because there is no need to pay for an expensive

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's appointment or

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service.

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, people can probably find

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of alternative medicine more effective for them, since it may show

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improvements and sometimes are a cheap alternative.

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, for individuals who do not have enough money

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of medicine can be more affordable and convenient since it has, in some cases,

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properties which help to improve organ functions

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as the heart, lungs or brain.

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, one drawback related to the

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of alternatives medicines is that it can be harmful to individuals, as some types of diseases need to be closely monitored.

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, people who do not have their

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course treated properly can be in a dangerous situation.

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, there are some comorbidities

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as diabetes, hypertension or cycle cell

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, which need to be strictly controlled by a

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's visit, in order to have all the adverse effects well monitored, without

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measure these diseases can easily attack individual'sindividual's organism, being lethal sometimes.

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even though the beneficial financial creates by not

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services are not more effective than having a

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well controlled by a

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visit regularly. Ideally,

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measure should be taken individually, as each individual knows what choices are more liable for them.