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An increasing number of people are choosing cosmetic surgery/ plastic surgery. Why do people have operations to change the way they look? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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With the advent of many technological developments, most
people
 are willing to choose many extra enhancements to their bodies in the form of surgeries. They are believing that
this
 kind of approach is a better way of re-inventing themselves. Provided that, they feel more self-esteemed and formidable with all the extra add-ons to their bodies, yet the adverse effects are very severe.
Firstly
,
although
 the rationale by
people
 who undergoes surgeries is slightly acceptable and convenient from their perspective, it still causes detrimental effects in the later stages of their life.
For Instance
, a famous celebrity Kylie Jenner took cosmetic surgery on her face during her early twenties,
although
 looked very beautiful for a period of time and everyone thought she might change the way of
people
's opinion towards
this
 and become a pioneer in all
this
 as time goes even with the help of professionals around her,
this
 began to show the harmful side-effects and now she had to transition her beautiful face. Many doctors
also
 suggest that
this
 kind of approach may even to death as it is a very intricate thing to do.
For example
, a famous magazine published a report saying that over the past 4 years, the deaths of
people
 who underwent Liposuction increased dramatically. It is a very risky surgery as it modifies the entire body and eliminates excess fat within a short period.
people
 should take extensive care of their bodies even after successful surgery and if it is neglected they might even die of heart stroke. Because of these temporary yet fast results, the cost is
also
 very high and a normal person is unable to bear all those expenses.
To conclude
, though there are many
people
 across the world who think changes to their body as imperative and choose plastic or cosmetic surgeries the after-effects will surely alleviate them.
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