the diagram below shows the production of olive oil

the diagram below shows the production of olive oil
This
diagram illustrates the manufacture of olive oil. It is clear from the graph that the procedure undergoes seven stages.
According to
what is shown,
to begin
the procedure the
laborers
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start with collected olives.
Following
this
stage, they put it in cold water to be rinsed after that it is going through the belt to be sorted, and
then
start with smashing olive grains.
Subsequently
, in
this
phase, it is created either olive paste or olive stones.
In addition
, after these steps, the production is collected in bags with holes.
The next step is
to get it to be pressed, before getting the products into storage the oil that has been extracted, water gets separated from it.
Finally
, it is will be ready for distribution. Tomsum up, we could say that
this
process starts with picking the olive beads to make them into paste or stones which need seven phases to be ready for sale.
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