The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure center. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The map illustrates three different places, where a
centre
to spend spare time can be built.
The first location
(A) is not quite appropriate due to
the reason that
a heavy industry fabric is located nearby. Correct word choice
apply
Therefore
, poor air quality is an argument against building a leisure centre
in this
location
.
The next place (B) is situated just near high-rise apartments. It is an appropriate point for a leisure centre
because people, who live there would enjoy having a special place to kill time somewhere near their flats.
The third location
(C) is the best one. This
location
can be found surrounded by small forests and fields. People would be able to get back to nature and play some open-air games such
as football in this
location
. However
, there are no roads, consequently
, it would be difficult to get there.
Overall
, it is possible to build a quite good leisure centre
in locations B and C but B would be more appropriate because it is located advantageously.Submitted by mgshetler on
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