you recently went to a lecture that you very much enjoied write letter to the orgniser of the lecture in your let .Explain that you really enjoied the lecture and why . ask for details about lecture *Suggest another lecture topic for futrue

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Dear Sir/Madam I m Nandika Nuwan Weerasekara ,who attended your organization's organized environments protection

lecture

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last

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week .

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getting

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opportunity

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your organization for invited to me and organising

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apply

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important lectures for people.The

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is excellent and gave us all the essential details in a funny way .

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have much enjoyed

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Kindly request to you please send me the

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contract details ,if he does not agree to give his details please share my detail with him my email add -

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gmail.com and my phone number 0778240368

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suggest to you and your organization to future plan one address on air pollution and how it controls from our side highly appreciate your positive reply thank you Nandita

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

123 words

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you recently went to a lecture that you very much enjoied write letter to the orgniser of the lecture in your let .Explain that you really enjoied the lecture and why . ask for details about lecture *Suggest another lecture topic for futrue

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

People are living in a ‘throwaway society,’ using things for a short time and then throwing them away. What are the causes of this? What problems does it lead to?

Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, Business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.

Students should pay the full cost for their own study, because university education benefits individual rather than society. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

More and more people are moving away from an agricultural background to relocate to cities in order to look for work. What will be the consequences of this? What solutions can you offer.