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The advantages of the spread of English as a global language will continue to outweigh its disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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People
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 have different views about the international
use
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 of
English
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. In
this
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pros
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the pros
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 and cons of
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issue
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 with reasons and give my opinion. On one hand,
it is clear that
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 the spread of
English
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 worldwide is beneficial in some cases. First of all,
people
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 can communicate easily
regradless
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regardless
 of
thier
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their
 nation. It is necessary for
people
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 who have to live in abroad
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 as international students to learn second languages to adapt to other
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.
However
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, the
use
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 of
English
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ease
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 their burden as many
people
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 can understand the
language
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 around the world. In Korea, a lot of universities
use
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English
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 in their classes of master's degree programs. Thanks to
this
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, international
sutdents
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students
 can finish their course and Korean students are able to experience several
culture
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cultures
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 between students without linguistic obstacles.
For
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this
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issue
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 has positive aspects.
On the other hand
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, there are more disadvantages in
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issue
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. In fact, every
languages
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 have its own
culture
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cultures
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such
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 as history and tradition. If the
countries
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 which do not
use
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English
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 as
mother-tongue
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a mother-tongue
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 increase the
use
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 of
English
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 in daily life, their custom and historical ego will become blurred.
Such
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 situations will lose the
identitiy
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identity
 of
countries
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 in the future.
For example
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,
literatures
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literature
kinds of literature
pieces of literature
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 in many
countries
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 are
wirtten
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written
by
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in
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 the country's own
language
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, and it contains the country's
sprtitual
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spiritual
 ideas. It is hard to translate the emotions and atmosphere
to
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English
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 perfectly. In
this
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 case, using
English
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 as a global
language
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 is not a good stance. 
Furthermore
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,
some
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in some
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countries
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' languages,
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the origin is not
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,
people
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many
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may
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experience
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experiences
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 more difficulty. In
case
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the case
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 of Asia, their
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are
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is
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origined
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originated
 from Chinese letters. It is impossible to change a large
amount
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 of words which are used in media to
English
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. In conclusion,
while
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 the spread of
English
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 as a international
language
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 provides
covenient
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convenient
 communication between foreigners, I am of the opinion that there are more disadvantages
about
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this
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issue
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such
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lose
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loss
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 of the country's identity and the difficulty of detailed translation.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global language
  • lingua franca
  • communication
  • employment opportunities
  • economic growth
  • cultural exchange
  • knowledge sharing
  • education
  • travel
  • linguistic diversity
  • cultural imperialism
  • linguistic imperialism
  • colonization
  • identity
  • language preservation
  • cultural heritage
  • mutual understanding
  • intercultural relationships
  • linguistic barriers
  • disadvantaged communities
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