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Topic from Task 1 The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households

Topic from Task 1 The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households
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The charts provide information about changes in
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number
 of households with electrical appliances and the amount of time contributed to housework per week, over a hundred-year period between 1919 and 2019. Looking over the charts, a few main trends turn out to be clear.
Firstly
, the
number
 of electrical devices in our houses shows
steady
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a steady
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 upward trend. Meanwhile, the
number
 of hours of housework continuously drops. A more detailed look at the first chart reveals that the most rapid raise was fixed for refrigerators. It had been boosted rapidly since 1920
,
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 and has taken its own place in each house to 1980 already.
As well as
 refrigerators, vacuum cleaners became well-spread in households during the
last
 century.
However
, the latter had
more
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a more
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 stable increase and achieve 100% of appearance only
to
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 2000. Washing machine seems to be less popular or less available for the
middle-class
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middle class
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 arguably. The percentage of
this
 device slightly fluctuated from 60% to 70% through the period between the 40s and 90s, but after that, the figure has been slowly rising since 2000. In terms of the
number
 of hours of housework per week, it is significantly falling. In the first half of
20th
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century
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 the figure plummeted twice and continued the decline
with
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slower
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a slower
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 rate. Following the data
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above, we could make an assumption that
this
 downward trend will continue
due to
total
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the total
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 increase
of
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usage
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the usage
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 of electrical devices in households.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rapid" was used 2 times.
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