You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost). Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost).

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing Task 1
The diagram illustrates how organic waste transforms into garden compost through recycling. In general, the process has five steps and originally begins with making a plastic
container
with holes so that the air can get
into
Correct pronoun usage
itinto
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.
Moreover
, the
last
step is getting the fertilizer out for use. In detail, when starting the production of compost, a plastic
container
with a total volume of exactly two cubic meters and at least four additional holes on the side is needed.
Next,
put together the waste
such
as leftover food or grasses and even old newspapers
then
fill it up to one-third of the height of the
container
. Moving on to the next step, a combination of hot water and nitrogen should be added to the plastic
container
, make sure to use the hot water only or else the mixture will not turn out successfully.
As a result
, the heat naturally comes out from each hole which is equally distributed on the side of the
container
in the first step.
In addition
, the mixture should be left there untouched for the next six months. After half a year, you will get a perfect amount of fertilizer for your own use in gardening.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words container with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycle
  • organic waste
  • garden fertilizer
  • compost
  • diagram
  • main features
  • comparisons
  • overview
  • collection
  • shredding
  • mixing
  • addition
  • water
  • bacteria
  • turning
  • aerating
  • pile
  • maturation
  • filtering
  • final product
  • before and after
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