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Some people claim that it is acceptable to use animals in medical research for the benefit of human beings, while others argue that it is wrong. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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During all periods of time,
medicine
 does not remain constant in their experiments and tries different kinds of pills on
animals
. Some people point to the fact about the importance of medical experiments, even if that too cruel to
animals
,
while
 another part of the community believes in finding alternatives way. Modern equipment and science produce more opportunities for trying not to use
animals
 as experimental equipment. Both of these statements will be discussed and seems in different ways in
this
 essay. First of all, the great part of the
products
 that you can see in your home or in the store has been tested on
animals
.
For instance
, all big cosmetics companies, shower
products
 or
medicine
. As evidence of
this
, scientists have been creating a safe and good quality product which was tested on real experiences
such
 as dog skin or fox eyes. But after the popular advertisement which shows
this
 action in an animated way, a great part of the public decided to through away and conned using all kinds of testified
products
.
Furthermore
,
this
 caused big company started to search for other variants of testing.
As a result
, many alternatives have been searched.
On the other hand
, if experiments on
animals
 stopped, new pills and
medicine
 for illness will not be funded as quickly as they are now. It will downsize the process which cost time and increased drawbacks effects.
Also
, most of the
products
 may not be checked for allergic symptoms. In conclusion,
unfortunately
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 experimentation on
animals
 may not be almost cancelled in the near future. Even so, modern
medicine
 does not stop and find different alternatives
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