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1. Students should pay the full cost of their own university studies, rather than have free higher education provided by the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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In recent years, there has been a debate on whether
students
 should pay for their university studies or if the state should provide free higher
education
. Some argue that
students
 paying for their
education
 would encourage them to work harder and take it more seriously,
while
 others believe that free
education
 would ensure equal opportunities for all.  Those in
favor
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 of
students
 paying argue that it would allow the government to allocate resources to other areas
such
 as healthcare, infrastructure, and social welfare.
However
, free higher
education
 promotes equality of opportunity, ensures that
everyone
 has the chance to reach their potential, and benefits society as a whole by creating a more productive and informed population. But
on the other hand
, in my opinion, making
students
 pay for their
education
 would create financial barriers for low-income
students
 and
middle high
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 class
students
,
therefore
 widening income inequalities.
Education
 is a basic right that should be accessible to
everyone
, regardless of their financial situation. Investing in
education
 would have a long-term positive impact on the economy, as highly educated individuals are more likely to contribute positively to society.  In conclusion, I believe that providing free higher
education
 is the better option. It promotes equality of opportunity, ensures that
everyone
 has the chance to reach their potential, and benefits society as a whole. Making
students
 pay for their
education
 would create financial barriers and widen income inequalities.
Education
 is a basic right that should be accessible to
everyone
, and if it is free
then
 people would be better educated, and it would have a long-term positive impact on the economy.
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