You have bought some clothing online and are not satisfied with your purchase. Write a letter to the company that you bought the clothing from. In your letter Give details of the purchase Describe the problem Explain why you need a replacement urgently
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you to inform you about my recent clothes purchased that I had from your webshop.
I have some problems regarding my received dresses, I have ordered an XL blue T-shirt, a pair of shoes,
as well as
, two pairs of trousers, one of them L and another XL size. However
, unfortunately
you made mistake and sent me trousers in the same size, both of them are L size.Add a comma
,unfortunately
Therefore
, I would send that back in order to replacement. In addition
, another problem that I faced is the T-shirt that I offered did not blue, that was red. But I like the red ones I decided to keep it
and use that.
Honestly, I am going to attend an important entertainment next week. because I don't have adequate time to come and change my clothes personality,Correct pronoun usage
them
therefore
, please alternative my trousers and send them back to my address as soon as possible.
thank you for your generation.
yours faithfully,Submitted by mehrdad_ph on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite