The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing house work in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing house work in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
The charts provided illustrate the changes in the percentage of households with electrical appliances and the hours of time spent doing chores from 1920 to 2019. The electrical appliances include the washing machine, refrigerator, and vacuum cleaner.
Overall
, the figures for the possession of electrical appliances presented a positive trend.
On the contrary
, the hours spent per week on housework witnessed a dramatic downfall. To be specific, the majority of electrical objects are refrigerators, which significantly rose from nearly 0 per
cent
in 1920 to 90 per
cent
in 1960, and went up slightly to 100 per
cent
in 1980. The numbers for vacuum cleaners
also
increased steadily from 30 per
cent
in 1920 and reached the highest point at 100 per
cent
by the year 2000. As for the washing machines, the amount climbed marginally from 40 per
cent
in 1920 and remained steady at 70 per
cent
until 2019. In the second chart, the time citizens in
this
country spent on housework experienced a drop from 50 per
cent
to 10 per
cent
consistently.
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