Some people say that to prevent illness and disease, governments should focus more on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The globalized world has become more interconnected than ever before in every way especially
illness
and disease
have become globalized problems
. In my opinion, we should focus on these problems
with our governments
but also
we need to realize what we are doing about environmental pollution
problems
.
Almost all governments
around the World are trying to find better solutions for environmental pollution
and housing problems
. This
is the correct way to prevent illness
and disease
. Furthermore
, at the same time
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,time
goverments
are avoiding Correct your spelling
governments
government
implementation
of solved Correct article usage
the implementation
problems
. The best example of this
is The Kyoto protocol
. There are so many solved Correct your spelling
Protocol
problems
about environmental pollution
in the protocol
. But some countries do not implement it even though they accepted it, also
some countries have given up protocol
. Every government needs protocols like the Kyoto Protocol
to solve environmental pollution
problems
. Moreover
, the
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governments
should support the building of liveable houses rather than government buildings. In poor countries, like my own country, huge government buildings have been built and they are not necessary. Governments
should realize that the
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quality
of life is much more important than other problems
. People
will have a better chance to decrease illness
and disease
if they solve pollution
and housing issues.
Furthermore
, people
should realize that the quality
of their lives is dependent on themselves. If people
want a better quality
house, they should demand more from their local authorities. For example
, people
may question how their taxes are spent and they may want different resources such
as long term
loans for house Add a hyphen
long-term
problems
. Also
, If people
want a higher quality
of life, they should keep going to develop their own solution
for environmental Fix the agreement mistake
solutions
problems
. These solutions may be small but the impact will be huge. For example
, recycle
, using public transport, respect Wrong verb form
recycling
to
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apply
walking
for short distances. These help to become healthy and Correct word choice
and walking
also
make the environment better. Therefore
will have a better chance to prevent illness
and disease
.
In conclusion, people
and their governments
or local authorities have to focus more on reducing environmental pollution
and housing problems
together so they can prevent illness
and disease
.Submitted by fatihmet on
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