In some areas of the US, a curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?
A curfew
have
been imposed in some of the regions of the US, Change the verb form
has
due to
high alert surveillance enterance
of teenagers in Correct your spelling
entrance
such
places has been prohibited post
Change preposition
at
the
sunset.Correct article usage
apply
However
, if nesessary
they can move Correct your spelling
necessary
oustside
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outside
in
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at
the
night with the company of an elder person.I completely agree with the decision and Correct article usage
apply
this
essay will dictate the pointers to support the statement. Initially
, youngsters who age
below 18 years Correct your spelling
are
are
considered Correct word choice
old are
as
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apply
the
soft targets who could be manipulated easily. Correct article usage
apply
Moreover
, this
is because they lack experience
to judge people around them.Change the article
the experience
Additionally
, they can be threatened or misbehaved easily from
any stranger. Change preposition
by
For instance
, a study showed that teens who age
under seventeen Correct your spelling
are
year
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years
are
Correct word choice
old are
soft hearted
, which is why they can be easily fooled in certain ways form any mature person with bad intentions. Add a hyphen
soft-hearted
Secondly
, plethora
of youth are Add an article
a plethora
the plethora
getting indulge
Wrong verb form
indulging
into
bad practices Change preposition
in
such
as consumption
of drugs, alcohol and betting as well. Correct article usage
the consumption
furthermore
, It can be a wise thing to keep them inside or even if they go outside then
one adult person should be there to company.However
, under their presence
it would be impossible for the young ones to get themselves involved with Add a comma
presence,
such
intoxications. To cite an example, a study from a psychology expert in the UK came out that thirteen to seventeen is the most vulnerable age
for the adolocents
, so it is recommended for the parents or siblings to keep an eye on most of the activities teenagers in their house are involvedCorrect your spelling
adolescents
.
Change preposition
in.
To conclude
, it is undeniably true that teenage is the most sensitive age
in a human being's lifetime which should be carefully addressed. However
, with little care from
parents must let their kids Change preposition
apply
to
enjoy Change the verb form
apply
the
life Correct article usage
apply
at
the fullest.Change preposition
to
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