Some people think that work is the most important thing of people’s life. Without the success of career, life become meaningless. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The pie chart displays the causes of land degradation globally and the table gives the same information but focuses on 3 regions which were North America (NA), Europe (
EU
), and Oceania (OCN
). Overall
, it can be seen that the majority of degradation came from over-grazing and the EU
contributed the most to degradation. The unit was measured in percentages.
To be specific, over-grazing had the highest proportions which were 35 of the total and the OCN
was found to be the most contributor in this
category which was 11.3 and followed by the EU
and the NA which took 5.5 and 1.5 respectively. The second degraded cause was deforestation which accounted for 30 of the total and the EU
dominated completely which took 9.8 while
the rest spent below 2. Similarly
, the EU
continued dominating in over-cultivation issues at 7.7 and the NA contributed the remaining percentage which was 3.3 while
the OCN
surprisingly did not participate in this
issue.
In conclusion, the EU
suffered from the devastation of land which was 23%, followed by the OCN
at 13% and the NA had the lowest cost at 5%.Submitted by amittawin on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite