Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say why a driving licence is advantageous • recommend a driving school • give any extra guidance/tips

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Dear Priyanka, Hope

this

letter finds you in radiant health and best of the spirits. I heard some news from our friend Jhon that you are planning to learn to drive. Recently, I finished my

car

driving activity and received a licence too. If you have a driving licence, it can be used as your identity card as well.

Finally

, I'm capable to drive a

car

alone without any help from others and with confidence. Kumaran's driving school,

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provides all the learning technics from basic to advanced levels and they will

also

guide in some repair technics. I guess the school is very near to your home, the address is 14th Avenue, Road No. 14, Mint Street. I recommend you to start the class with 20 days of sessions and they will provide instructions to apply for a driving licence. I prefer you to wear comfortable clothes and once you complete three classes, you will start gaining confidence in driving. It will be inconvenient to wear a seat belt

while

starting the class but don't forget to wear a seat belt and

also

adjust the side mirrors of your

car

. Hope to see you soon after finishing your

car

driving course. Best wishes Swetha.

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

205 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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