Many people use social media every day to get in touch with other people and obtain the news. Do you think the advantages of this way outweigh the disadvantages?

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We are now living in the 21st century where social
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developed very much in the technological development era.
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there are some small problems with the widespread use of social
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, I think
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trend brings more pros than cons. Actually, when we use the Internet for a long
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, we can suffer from some health problems like eye strain or
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. Why these problems appear is very easy to explain. If we spend all our
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looking at the screen of our phone or PC, the light and waves of the screen can negatively affect our eyes or brain and
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may cause
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symptoms below.
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, using social
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everyday
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can be a bad habit because we do not have sufficient
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for other activities like sports, family
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or housework.
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, the invention of social
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provides humans
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different benefits in entertainment, communication,
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or education. First and foremost, social
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helps us have an easier and faster way to keep in touch with all other people from all over the world. We can
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access news immediately with the fast speed of the Internet without waiting for a long
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as in the past.
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, a football fan in Vietnam can watch the live match of Real Madrid and Manchester United in Europe through a small screen thanks to many online apps or Internet channels.
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, education and
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are supported a lot by social
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.
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, before the existence of social
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, teachers had to call or send SMS messages to students’ parents, and
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way cost quite a lot of money, but now, they only need to have a smartphone with online chatting apps to exchange information with parents about their offsprings.
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, some multinational online meetings which are held at the
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when the world was suffering from COVID-19 helped the governments of all countries and the leaders of international organizations discuss solutions to resolve
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dangerous disease. In a nutshell, we can hardly say that social
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does not have any backwards, but the advantages of it outweigh the disadvantages.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • immediacy
  • revolutionized
  • digestible
  • facilitating
  • niche communities
  • overreliance
  • misinformation
  • privacy concerns
  • decreased face-to-face interactions
  • perceive
  • readily available
  • implications
  • traditional forms of communication
  • outlets
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