Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?

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Environment, population and education will be the common problems for the countries in

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future. Below I will discuss the problems which my country

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possibility

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to face and give a solution to overcome them. Uzbekistan is

developing

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country and nowadays we are around 50 years behind

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modern countries like Amerika,

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, Dubay and others. But I think the problem which will truly be is

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population. Uzbekistan is small so every person born is a problem.

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, every person

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a place to live, food to eat, clothes to wear and a lot of other things.

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generation

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is becoming very lazy so there

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possibility

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that people can’t find

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for themselves.

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too because of

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of teachers,doctors and others. The best solution for

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is creating machine learning robots which can replace humans in any sphere.

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can not make mistakes which

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can do.

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bot

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are much more clever than us.

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, people can teach all aspects of

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math with simple definitions

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for teachers it can take many

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of time and

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there is

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will have a mistake.

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, I think it will be better if all people in the world will have

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exact amount of things that they can use.

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, all will have maybe 30 litres of water which they can use and nothing more even if they want to pay extra funds and it is for everything like

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, light and others. In conclusion, these problems can be solved in several ways and some of them may be more effective than replacing humans with artificial intelligence and giving an exact amount of something.

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

Sustainability
Ecosystem
Renewable resources
Urbanization
Demographics
Healthcare system
Pension crisis
Curriculum development
Digital literacy
E-learning platforms
Lifelong learning
Public policy
Biodiversity conservation
Green technology
Population density
Generational equity
Economic disparity

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