Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?
Environment, population and education will be the common problems for the countries in
coming
future. Below I will discuss the problems which my country Correct article usage
the coming
have
Correct subject-verb agreement
has
possibility
to face and give a solution to overcome them.
Uzbekistan is Add an article
the possibility
a possibility
developing
country and nowadays we are around 50 years behind Correct article usage
a developing
the
modern countries like Amerika, Correct article usage
apply
UK
, Dubay and others. But I think the problem which will truly be is Correct article usage
the UK
growing
population. Uzbekistan is small so every person born is a problem. Add an article
a growing
the growing
For example
, every person need
a place to live, food to eat, clothes to wear and a lot of other things. Change the verb form
needs
Secondly
, generation
is becoming very lazy so there Correct article usage
the generation
are
Change the verb form
is
possibility
that people can’t find Add an article
a possibility
the possibility
job
for themselves. Add an article
a job
the job
After
this
Add a comma
,this
this
will be Remove the redundancy
apply
problem
for Add an article
a problem
government
too because of Add an article
the government
lack
of teachers,doctors and others.
The best solution for Correct article usage
the lack
this
is creating machine learning robots which can replace humans in any sphere. Firstly
can not make mistakes which human
can do. Fix the agreement mistake
humans
Secondly
, bot
are much more clever than us. Fix the agreement mistake
bots
For instance
, people can teach all aspects of the
math with simple definitions Correct article usage
apply
while
for teachers it can take many amount
of time and Change to a plural noun
amounts
moreover
there is Add a comma
,moreover
possibility
that Add an article
the possibility
a possibility
it
will have a mistake. Correct pronoun usage
they
Although
, I think it will be better if all people in the world will have a
exact amount of things that they can use. Change the article
an
For example
, all will have maybe 30 litres of water which they can use and nothing more even if they want to pay extra funds and it is for everything like meal
, light and others.
In conclusion, these problems can be solved in several ways and some of them may be more effective than replacing humans with artificial intelligence and giving an exact amount of something.Fix the agreement mistake
meals
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