Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?( how much do agree or desagre )

It’s always controversial whether the governments

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as well as

the developed

companies

contribute in a huge part to the sustainable development of the environment compared to the citizens, I partially agree with the fact that only governments and

companies

have an impact on

the

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nature, On one hand, undisputedly, the large

companies

contribute

along with

the governments to save mother earth, which is illustrated by the fact that private enterprises fund the advanced research

as well as

experimentation of recent studies which are always supervised by the governmental institutions,

such

as

,

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agricultural invention aiming to enhance the quality of crops in the meanwhile reduce the consumption of used water, alternatively, as a compensation, the government reduce the taxes rate for these group,

furthermore

, the enterprise benefits from a wide range of facilities as a reward,

consequently

, big private establishment finances the environmental projects

while

the state organization supervises and keep track the advancement, the tight partnership lasts longer

On the other hand

, the individual’s contribution still exists

however

, it is not as impactful as the government's efforts,

for example

, various citizens organize campaigns of sensibilization about the importance of the environment and the regulation

as well as

habits to preserve it,

furthermore

, citizens can

also

have a considerable influence on the nature when the right habits are adopted,

for instance

, stop using the drinking water to wash their cars in the period of water stress, in short, the individual’s behaviour is very essential to make a difference alongside the government

To conclude

, individuals can make a difference in terms of environmental development, yet, the collaboration between the governmental establishment and big

companies

has a powerful input on the environment,