Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?( how much do agree or desagre )

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contribute in a huge part to the sustainable development of the environment compared to the citizens, I partially agree with the fact that only governments and

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nature, On one hand, undisputedly, the large

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contribute

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the governments to save mother earth, which is illustrated by the fact that private enterprises fund the advanced research

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experimentation of recent studies which are always supervised by the governmental institutions,

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agricultural invention aiming to enhance the quality of crops in the meanwhile reduce the consumption of used water, alternatively, as a compensation, the government reduce the taxes rate for these group,

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, the enterprise benefits from a wide range of facilities as a reward,

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, big private establishment finances the environmental projects

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the state organization supervises and keep track the advancement, the tight partnership lasts longer

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, the individual’s contribution still exists

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, it is not as impactful as the government's efforts,

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, various citizens organize campaigns of sensibilization about the importance of the environment and the regulation

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habits to preserve it,

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, citizens can

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have a considerable influence on the nature when the right habits are adopted,

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, stop using the drinking water to wash their cars in the period of water stress, in short, the individual’s behaviour is very essential to make a difference alongside the government

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, individuals can make a difference in terms of environmental development, yet, the collaboration between the governmental establishment and big

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has a powerful input on the environment,