The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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We can see two line charts, which are illustrating the situation with owning household items and their influence on the amount of housework per week between 1920 and 2019. Generally, we can see a strong connection between these two graphs.
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spent by people doing different types of housework depends on the number of electronic devices. The more items individuals have, the less time they spend on domestic work.
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the first chart, when refrigerators appeared on the stores' shelves, washing machines and vacuum cleaners were used by 40% and 30% of humans.
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, fridges started rapidly gaining popularity and now they are the most common among users.
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, washing machines, which were on top in 1920 started losing admiration in 1960 and now they are the least used, the percentage of people, who are using them is only 75. Talking about the second graph, we can say, that the number of time, which is spent on housework was evenly decreasing at all times. We can clearly see, that it was 50 hours per week when now it is only 10 hours.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership of electrical appliances
  • steadily increased
  • dramatically decreased
  • correlating the rise
  • became common
  • households
  • prevalence
  • technological advancements
  • increased affordability
  • household chores
  • labor-saving devices
  • allocated for housework
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