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In many countries, people are living in a “throwaway society” where things are used for a short time and thrown away. What are the causes of this and what problems does it lead to?

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In
this
 age products' use times are decreasing obviously. I can clearly say that it is going to be a huge problem for the next generations. In
this
 essay, I am going to explain what the causes are of these problems and which kind of problems we deal with in the
close
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 future.
To begin
 with causes,
one
 of the important issues is fast
fashion
. Many types of research show that the
fashion
 industry is
one
 of the most harmful industries all over the world. It uses too much water supply and unrecyclable material. Especially young spend a lot of money on fast
fashion
 products and they wear them less than 10 times. Even though it was cheap clothing, wearing only
one
 season is a huge waste.
Secondly
, getting an item is way too easy , many
people
 even don't try to fix the broken
one
instead
 of buying a new
one
.
While
 elder
people
 experienced poverty more than
gen z
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 or millennials they are more careful with
the
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garment
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 and mostly avoid buying new items. It is a fact that, if
people
 continue to live like
this
, there will be lots of issues.
For example
, water supplies are going to run out as big companies use uncontrolled amounts of water and throw the waste into seas or oceans. Depending on that, algae and other sea creatures will get seriously damaged. As algae are significant to oxygen, the CO2 levels will increase
while
 O2 is decreasing. Plus many factories release CO2 as waste. All these issues will gather up in global warming because it is directly related to the density of gases in the air.
To sum up
, nowadays many
people
 use their stuff for a shorter time. Fast
fashion
 and lack of garments might be the main reasons and our planet is in danger. If we
don't
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careful about the environment there
would
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 be a serious response from
mother nature
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Mother Nature
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.
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