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To, <department> <university> Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Tran Dinh Cung – Business Unit Leader at FPT Software, Vietnam. It is with pleasure that I am writing

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letter of recommendation for Mr.

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Xuan

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Minh

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to support his application for the MS in Computer Science course at your esteemed. I have worked with

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for the past 2 years

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he joined as a solution architect, he gained many achievements

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his diligence, hard

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, and innovative aptitude. I was fortunate to be his immediate supervisor since the first time he joined our company.

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Xuan

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Minh

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is an extremely organized and self-motivated individual and has excellent problem-solving and technical skills. He can perform well within deadlines even under great pressure and has the skills to lead a team skillfully. He possesses software design thinking abilities and can critically analyze the issues to foresee upcoming problems and has the capability to

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out solutions by going beyond the call of duty if required. When he started his job, he used to be silently observing the procedures and asked the right questions to understand the whole system requirements from its grassroots level and gradually started taking initiatives to design the system architecture both at high and detail levels and transfer that information to team members. He likes to challenge himself and sets goals that may seem difficult to others but the leader and the executor in him know how to take things forward and make them

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. He has a unique ability to motivate others

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to deliver their best

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which his team is always a winner. He takes interest in new ideas and takes steps only once he understands the whole scenario. The best quality of him is being honest and owning a mistake even if it is absolutely negligible. His working style and efforts changed a lot in our company and the marks made by him will always remain with us. When he expressed his desire to go for higher studies as he wants to get into higher technical skill and higher management, everyone felt that he is on the right course. Though we will lose his presence in our

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and initiatives will remain with us and we sincerely hope that after completing his MSc he will be able to contribute a lot to the industries and the nation. With the aforementioned reasons, I would highly recommend Mr.

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Xuan

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for the postgraduate program offered by your university. It is my pleasure to give you more information if necessary. Sincerely, Tran Dinh Cung Business Unit Leader FPT Software, Vietnam. Tel: (+84) 988655397 Email: <email>

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

443 words

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In the future, all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think te advantages of driverless vechicles outweigh the disadvantages.?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Some people think it is more important to spend money on roads and motorways than on public transport systems. To what extend do you agree?

More and more companies should employ older people. Do you agree?

In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

Many shopping malls have been built in different countries all over the world. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this for the local people?