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Some people think it is a better way to leave their home country to improve their work and living opportunities, while others think staying in their own country is a better choice. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

#people #home #country #work #opportunities #choice
Some individuals believe that it is more effective to leave their
hometown
 and find a good workplace and an abode to improve is better,
while
 others suggest that staying in their own city is better. I suggest that it depends on, and where you live. But I
also
 think that if
this
person
keens
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keeps
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 on his work and really likes what he does, he can find a lot of ways how to stay in his
hometown
 and at that time earn money. Nowadays a part of the population moves to another country to earn a good salary and find a good workplace and
opportunities
 for living.
For example
, a
person
 who left his own country and has started to work there and started to earn his first salary for it, I think that in another country he will do the same things as he would do in his
hometown
. I suggest that if even one
person
 can stay in and start to work and improve himself he will achieve the same things as he could achieve abroad. As regards another side, maybe
this
person
want
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 to travel and create
opportunities
 for his family.
For example
, for
the
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a
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person
 who left their
hometown
 with the whole ,family it will be really hard to provide for his family. That's why it's better to stay.
Moreover
,
,
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lately
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 we have all
opportunities
 to improve.
For instance
, networks and applications where we can even stay at home and make money. It is all
opportunity
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an opportunity
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 for humans, but not each of us can recognize it or learn how to use it exactly. In conclusion, it is vivid that people always find a difficult way for them, when they have an opportunity in their hands and around them. We should look around us and understand what kind of
opportunities
 we have and use them for good.
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  • professional growth
  • quality of life
  • stronger economies
  • employment opportunities
  • advancement opportunities
  • emotional bonds
  • cultural ties
  • familiar environment
  • contributing to
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  • personal aspirations
  • cultural identity
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