Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Although
some people arguing
that there Wrong verb form
argue
are
a Change the verb form
is
lot
of benefit
for the Change to a plural noun
benefits
host
country
to organize a global sport
Change the noun form
sports
event
, sometimes hosting an international sport
Change the noun form
sports
event
bring to some issues such
as work condition. Furthermore
, these events are used to cover dramatic and awful situation
inside the Fix the agreement mistake
situations
nation
, in this
case
it is not possible to say that a global Add the comma(s)
,case
sport
Change the noun form
sports
event
is good for the country
.
First of all, there are some benefits of hosting a global sport
Change the noun form
sports
event
such
as renovation
of the Add an article
the renovation
sport
structures, more workplaces and Change the noun form
sports
also
a lot
of tourism. All these variables are very important for the economy of a nation
and there is no doubt about it. For example
, in the
2026 in Change the article
apply
Italy
there will be the Add a comma
,Italy
winter
Olympics. Correct your spelling
Winter
This
event
has brought to
a Change preposition
about
lot
of other events, tourism
and the reconstruction of the winter Change preposition
including tourism
sport
structures in Italy, creating new job opportunities, Fix the agreement mistake
sports
impacting
in a positive way on the Italian economy.
Having said that, there are a Correct word choice
and impacting
lot
of bad scenarios of hosting a global event
and who
sustain that an international Correct pronoun usage
those who
sport
Change the noun form
sports
event
is not good for the country
usually arguing
about the Wrong verb form
argue
event
like a laundry machine for money
. Specifically, Add an article
the money
this people
Change the determiner
this person
these people
arguing
Wrong verb form
argue
that is
used for spending and recycling money in a hidden way covered by the mediatic attention that the sport
Change the verb form
sporting
event
brings with itself. For instance
, this
is the case
of the last
world
cup organised in Qatar which exploded in an international case
called as
Qatar-gate. Change preposition
apply
Furthermore
, it was
signalised the bad condition of workers and the corruption of some Euro Parliamentary and FIFA Unnecessary verb
apply
president
and Fix the agreement mistake
presidents
committee
from Qatar to be chosen as Fix the agreement mistake
committees
host
Add an article
the host
a host
country
.
Moreover
, it seems that nation
decide to Correct article usage
the nation
be
Unnecessary verb
apply
host
of
a global Change preposition
apply
sport
event
to hide and cover national issue
and show to the entire Fix the agreement mistake
issues
world
that the country
is in a good situation. Two examples of this
case
are the Olympics in Germany during the Second World
War and the 2014 World
Cup in Brazil.
To conclude
, during the
human Correct article usage
apply
history
it is shown how hosting an international Add a comma
,history
sport
Change the noun form
sports
event
is a politics
vehicle to cover and hide terrible situations. Replace the word
political
For
this
reason
it is necessary that the authorities, who have the decision power about which Add a comma
,reason
nation
will host
a global event
such
as Olympics
, Correct article usage
the Olympics
also
evaluate others
criteria like the social situation of the hosting Correct quantifier usage
other
nation
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