The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it now. what extend do you agree or disagree?

there is a controversial perspective, Nowadays most

people

don'

t

accurate about their

health

,

hence

, the number of unhealthy

people

will be increased in the future, personally, I agree that The portion of

people

's

health

goes down in the future than is now, I feel

this

way for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.

to begin

with, most

people

around the world are very obsessed with mobile phones and spending time in coffee without any objective,

in addition

, that kills energy widely, so adults

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and teenagers can'

t

do other things, like going to the gym or wake up early for taking a cold shower,

for instance

, my friend every day he woke up very late, he did not take any benefits from their breakfast, that's the first things, the second thing, the lack of their energy it reduced dramatically so become idle,

furthermore

, that appears different diseases,

Such

as Tension, Insomnia and more

as a consequence

,there is a wide range of

people

aware of their

health

,

moreover

, most nations in these are, Starting doing gym, running some days in the early morning and that goes up, in two gender men's and women's

also

younger's,

therefore

, the average of

people

's

health

increased dramatically,

for example

, my mother every morning get up on a lot of activities she loved,

Firstly

, yoga

then

a cup of coffee after that go out walking about 30 minutes with no phone, and she didn'

t

use social media's,

nevertheless

, she didn'

t

eat junk food,

as well as

all she's friends like her. in conclusion, as I mentioned

firstly

,

People

don'

t

aware of their

health

,

therefore

, the percentage of unhealthy

people

will be increased hardly in the future, Personally, I strongly believe that supports my point of view.