The two maps show the road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010

The two maps show the road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010
The two maps display the
roads
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access to a
city
hospital between 2007 and 2010.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that many facilities were improved around the
city
hospital by including a bus station, roundabouts, and separate
car
parks. In 2007, a hospital was surrounded by Ring
Road
and connected with Hospital
Road
, which was located in front of the
City
Hospital. The staff and public
car
parks had been added in the southeast of the
City
Hospital along Hospital
Road
.
Moreover
,
City
Road
was intersect with Hospital
Road
. In 2010, an outstanding improvement was a separate
car
park. The public
car
park was newly relocated
at
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the east of
City
Hospital,
whereas
the former was exclusively assigned to the hospital staff. Another development was a combination of six bus stops into one large station based on the southeast of the
City
Hospital.
This
bus station was
also
linked with two new connected roundabouts, which joined three main routes together.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words city, car, road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • dual carriageway
  • roundabout
  • traffic flow
  • multi-story car park
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian provisions
  • footpaths
  • traffic signals
  • construction phase
  • ambulances
  • carriageway expansion
  • traffic congestion
  • pedestrian crossings
  • urban planning
  • infrastructure development
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