The two maps show the road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010
The two maps display the
roads
access to a Change the noun form
road
city
hospital between 2007 and 2010.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that many facilities were improved around the city
hospital by including a bus station, roundabouts, and separate car
parks.
In 2007, a hospital was surrounded by Ring Road
and connected with Hospital Road
, which was located in front of the City
Hospital. The staff and public car
parks had been added in the southeast of the City
Hospital along Hospital Road
. Moreover
, City
Road
was intersect with Hospital Road
.
In 2010, an outstanding improvement was a separate car
park. The public car
park was newly relocated at
the east of Change preposition
to
City
Hospital, whereas
the former was exclusively assigned to the hospital staff. Another development was a combination of six bus stops into one large station based on the southeast of the City
Hospital. This
bus station was also
linked with two new connected roundabouts, which joined three main routes together.Submitted by Jeyul on
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