You are having a party and want to invite your friend from a different city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: •Describe why you are having the party •Give directions on how to get to the venue •Suggest how you can accommodate him/her Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ___,
Dear Rachel,
I hope
this
letter finds you well! I'd like to invite you to our housewarming party, which I have been dreaming about since you and I were in college. It’s a great opportunity to bring friends together, have some fun, and enjoy good food and music. I would love for you to come and join us!
To get to my venue, simply take the Pham Van Dong highway towards the Binh Trieu Bridge and exit at 27th Street. From there, you'll head straight until you reach the park; my place is just a block past that, on the left side. Look for the grey house with the white fence—it’s hard to miss!
Since you’ll be Linking Words
traveling
from out of town, I’d be more than happy to accommodate you. You can stay overnight at my house to avoid any late-night travel stress. I have a guest room ready for you, and I’ll make sure to have everything you need for a comfortable stay.
I really hope you can make it! Let me know if you can come.
Your lovingly,
Trang DaoChange the spelling
travelling
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coherence cohesion
Your response is well-organized with logical progression, but providing more specific details about the party could enhance the richness of the description.
task achievement
Make sure all details are clear and complete, specifically the reason for the party could be slightly expanded.
suitable writing tone
The letter has a warm and inviting tone, perfect for a friendly invitation.
logical structure
Logical flow of ideas and well-structured paragraphs make it easy to read.
greeting and closing
The greeting and closing of the letter are appropriately used.
single idea per paragraph
Clear paragraphing with each paragraph focusing on a specific idea.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite