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Now a days , many people drive to work or school instead of walking, cycling or public transport. Does this trend have more advantages or more disadvantages ?

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These days many people have been using more private
cars
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 to
work
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 or school
instead
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 of going on foot , riding a bicycle and taking public transport. I do believe that daily automobile usage for
work
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 and educational purposes has more drawbacks rather than benefits.
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 with, comfort can be the number one benefit in terms of driving to
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.
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 is because rushing in the morning in order to get ready for
work
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 can be stressful.
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, getting into a car and listening to a favourite song or podcast on the way to
work
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 could get rid of stress and
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 you would not be bothered
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 enjoying your favourite song compared to public transport where a person might feel comfortable owing to lack of privacy. Another major benefit of making use of a private car to
work
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 could be that you can go door to door.
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 means walking is not required when your office is located far from the bus or metro stations. To give a clear example, you will not get soaked under the rain ,especially in rainy seasons.
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, there are negative aspects of making use of private vehicles on a daily basis for job and study purposes. The
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 on the roads are causing air pollution because of burning fossil fuels. It means it is affecting the ozone layer negatively.
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, the earth is getting hotter and hotter. Another negative side of driving to
work
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 is the streets with many
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 . Workers are heading to the
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 during rush hour and it leads to bumper-to-bumper traffic which has a negative impact on people who might waste their time or be stressed by signals that inpatients honking. In conclusion,
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 some people can benefit from driving their
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 by having privacy and comfort, still in my opinion, they will face issues of global warming and traffic jam
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 daily auto usage.
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