In some countries, owning a home rather than renting renting one is very important for people. Why might ths be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

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in British. International laws should be implemented to control the

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and ownership . I would agree people should not rely on their own

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it may become high

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of patrols and high rate of CO2 emissions and pollution . I believe developing more public

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and using alternate

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to facilitate public transportation will reduce

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facilities , people will prefer to take public

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need to worry about parking fees and parking locations. In addition,

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can minimise their daily costs like petrol expenses , parking fees and

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costs.

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for each vehicle or

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buying

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some debate about using of more

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should reduce using

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in their daily life unless

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or some reasons like health problems and urgent incidents.

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infected. Public transport are majority

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from different

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with everyone.

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part of urban operations may

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and overcrowded.

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of patrols may lead to pollution which

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and global warming. Technology influence

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daily life and substitute

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normal

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. There are

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than using

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need to negotiate and make a strategy to minimize

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of more

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so that the gold is set as per ambition.