In recent years, many small local shops have closed because consumers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or a negative development?
There are some advantages and disadvantages between teaching
children
at home
and children
going to school
. Personally, I would agree with children
going to school
. Based on my own childhood experience, children
need to get knowledge (to avoid a repeat of experiences) of the outside world. Humans cannot prosper/develop alone. Teaching children
at home
is a form of isolation. Children
might become antisocial and selfish. Less communication and negotiation skills
would make them lower in sympathy and empathy due to
living in a small world (spoiled). Children
going to school
will see improvement through comparison and competition. They are learning and collaborating with each other. They may improve their social skills
and cooperation skills
. They can learn about society and build their own community in the future. They will learn based on their experiences and be able to compare who is trustworthy and who is not. On the contrary
, teaching children
at home
may improve focus on education and parents not to worry about bullying and the ‘wrong friendships’. Parents can rule (discipline/raise) children
without being disturbed by other different cultures. Children
have been raised according to
family traditional ways,
and would be able to sustain the family culture.Remove the comma
apply
Children
who are open-minded and have social skills
will not be afraid to communicate with others.They are more mature than children
who are isolated at home
. Since they may have a variety of ideas from learning and (more than likely) higher EQ. To sum up
, it is best that parents decide based on the situation. Those children
who have health conditions are often better taught at home
. In my ,opinion children
going to school
is better, and I agree with this
because we as a society and community will continue to survive.Submitted by maysweet1787 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite